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The Last Cup

Fiction, Submitted for Your Approval, as Part of the Substack Zone Event

Nov 24, 2024

The Twilight Zone redefined storytelling, drawing audiences into the unimaginable. Now, 66 years later, top writers, artists, and musicians are stepping into its eerie glow with a fresh twist. Ready to see where they’ll take you?

The Last Cup

Reflected light from the screensaver pulsed across Scott’s face like a digital heartbeat. 3:47 AM. He’d spent the last hour untangling the spiderweb mass of wires in the server room, and carefully labeling each one in his precise handwriting. Like so many things, no one would notice his efforts or even care. The cleaning crew had come and gone without a word. They were used to finding him hunched over his keyboard during their rounds, just another piece of office furniture that came alive at night.

He reached for his energy drink, found it empty. The mini-fridge under his desk held five more cans arranged in a perfect row. He’d tried to use the breakroom fridge in the past, but they kept disappearing. Each theft marked by a sticky note: “Sorry! I’ll replace it tomorrow!” Nobody ever did. The violation outraged him, but he couldn’t bring himself to speak up. Instead, he began keeping his supplies close, like everything else in his life.

The network monitoring dashboard showed the usual overnight activity. Mostly automated processes and the occasional insomniac checking email. Scott had written a script that turned the data into a sort of symphony. Each server’s activity created a different tone. Tonight’s melody was a familiar one. Almost soothing. The repeated notes and tones imbued him with a sense of safety that everything was running exactly as it should.

The security guard who patrolled the cubicle farm passed by each night at 4 AM. Sometimes he would ask why Scott didn’t just automate everything so he could work from home like the other IT guys. Scott never knew how to explain that his empty apartment felt even lonelier than an empty office.

His phone dinged. That was an unusual sound in the quiet of the night. He nearly ignored it. He assumed it was another automated alert about disk space or bandwidth usage, but this notification was different: Unknown Sender.

“You have to save him. Stockton and Merced 6:42 AM.”

The world froze. The bouncing numbers of the screensaver halted their journey across Scott’s monitor, trapped in digital amber at 3:49 AM. From the shadows emerged a gaunt man in an immaculate suit, his movements liquid in that static moment. The cherry of his cigarette glowed as he drew a long breath, the only warmth in the suspended air.

His voice cut through the stillness: “Picture, if you will, a man who spends his nights alone with machines, more comfortable with code than conversation. Scott Robison, an IT professional who's about to discover that some debugging requires more than technical expertise. His morning routine at The Daily Grind coffee shop is the one constant in his carefully ordered world until anonymous text messages begin to arrive, each one warning of impending disaster, each one demanding a choice.

What begins as a simple crush on a barista who knows his order by heart will lead Scott to question the very nature of heroism, sacrifice, and love itself. A tale served hot and fresh at The Daily Grind, where today's special is tomorrow's destiny, and the price of saving lives might be higher than anyone is prepared to pay.

Submitted for your consideration: a story of love and timing, where a man's last cup of coffee might just be his first...in the Twilight Zone.”

Without comment, the man turned away, his footsteps echoing in perfect isolation across the room. The shadows welcomed him back like an old friend. As he vanished, life stuttered forward. The screensaver's numbers resumed their endless dance, and the clock ticked over to 3:50 AM.

Scott read the message three times. He adjusted his glasses with nervous fingers. He’d written dozens of filters to block spam and scam texts, each one more sophisticated than the last. None of them had caught this. How did it get past his systems? He tried tracing the number, but his tools showed nothing. It was as if the message had just appeared. Computers—and networks—didn’t work like that.

Stockton and Merced. He passed through that intersection every morning on his way home. He took pride in how well he precisely timed his commute to avoid the heaviest of the daily traffic. 6:42 was exactly the moment when he usually waited at the light every morning. Counting the seconds until it changed and watching the many parents hurry their children off to school while he clutched his empty to-go cup from The Daily Grind in anticipation of his morning pick-me up. And secretly wondering if Cassandra would be working the morning shift again.

He shouldn’t go. It was probably nothing. Some random, misdirected message or a new type of scam his filters hadn’t caught yet. As he sat in the empty office, listening to the hum of the servers and watching the dashboard’s endless scroll, he realized he couldn’t remember the last time anyone had asked him for help with something that wasn’t connected to a circuit board.

The next morning, he stood at the corner and felt foolish. The crisp dawn air bit through his jacket as he checked his phone: 6:41 AM. Kids in backpacks too big for their small frames shuffled past. A mother in a business suit held her son’s hand, phone pressed to her ear. The light turned green.

The boy’s hand slipped free. A red ball bounced into the street. Everything else moved in slow motion: the child’s gleeful chase, the mother’s scream, the cargo van’s rumbling approach.

Scott moved without thinking. His body, usually so hesitant and awkward in social situations, knew exactly what to do. He lunged forward, arms reaching and wrapping around the small body, rolling them both back onto the sidewalk as the van rushed past, horn blaring.

The mother’s thank yous blurred together. The child stared at him with wide eyes. Other pedestrians patted his back and called him a hero. Scott nodded, mumbled something appropriate, and hurried away. His heart hammered against his ribs. Back in his car, hands shaking on the steering wheel, he pulled out his phone to look at the message again.

It was gone.

The only evidence that anything unusual had happened was his torn jacket sleeve and the lingering feeling that maybe, just maybe, he wasn’t as invisible as he thought.

The Daily Grind

The bell above the door to The Daily Grind chimed at precisely 7:15 AM. Scott touched his right pocket (wallet), left pocket (phone), and adjusted his glasses. It was his morning ritual. The rich scent of fresh-ground coffee beans wrapped around him like a familiar blanket. To his right, an elderly woman worked on a crossword puzzle, her half-finished cappuccino left fairy rings on the napkin beneath it. Each ring served as silent documentary for the cup's travels. Six people stood in line which was normal for this time of day. Safe.

“Vanilla latte, extra shot?” Cassandra was already reaching for the large cup, her silver bracelet caught the morning light. She’d drawn a small star next to the sleeve marking. She always did that, though he’d never asked why. “And you’ll want the blueberry muffin today. They’re fresh.”

Scott blinked. He’d been planning to try the blueberry muffin for weeks but always defaulted to the banana nut at the last second. “How did you…”

“You always look at it first,” Cassandra said, tucking a strand of dark hair behind her ear. “Then you get banana instead. I figured today might be different.” She glanced at his torn jacket sleeve, a remind of this morning’s rescue, then quickly away. Something flickered across her face. Pride? Sadness?

“I do?” He hadn’t realized he was that predictable. Or that she’d noticed.

The espresso machine hissed, and Cassandra moved with a practiced grace that he always admired. Her hands danced over levers and switches. He watched her work, mentally cataloging her routine like a familiar piece of code: steam the milk first, pull the shot, three pumps of vanilla, combine in a precise order. She never used the fourth pump like the other baristas, and he’d never had to tell her he preferred it less sweet.

Behind him, someone cleared their throat. Scott startled, realizing he’d been staring. He fumbled for his wallet and nearly dropped it. Cassandra slid his drink across the counter before he could swipe his card.

“It’s been quiet this morning,” she said softly. Her eyes held his for a moment too long, heavy with something he couldn’t read. “I mean, before you came in. Quieter than usual.” She emphasized the last word strangely, as if it carried some hidden meaning.

“Oh. That’s… good?” Social scripts failed him. Was this small talk? An observation? A warning?

Cassandra’s smile turned gentle. “It’s different anyway.” She pushed the blueberry muffin toward him. “On the house today. Sometimes different is good.”

Scott retreated to his usual corner table, the one with the clear sightlines of both exits. The muffin was still warm. He pulled out his phone, intending to check his email, but found himself watching Cassandra instead. She moved through the growing morning rush with fluid efficiency, but something seemed off. Every few minutes she’d check the ancient analog clock above the register, her expression tightening each time.

At 7:23, she dropped a customer’s change. Two quarters rolled under the pastry case.

At 7:24, she jumped when the grinder kicked on even though she’d just pressed the button herself.

At 7:25, while steaming milk for a cappuccino, she mouthed silent words that looked like “please” and “this time.”

The blueberry muffin, he discovered, was perfect. He’d been missing out all these months. As he stood to leave, Cassandra called out, “See you tomorrow, Scott!” Then, quieter almost to herself: “Maybe tomorrow will be different.”

He thought about that all the way to his car. It wasn’t until he was unlocking his door that he realized he’d never told her his name.

Patterns

The second message arrived during another quiet night shift. Scott had spent hours trying to trace the first one: running diagnostics, checking logs, even writing new code to analyze text messages metadata. Nothing. The message had vanished completely, leaving only the lingering memory of a small boy’s startled face and his mother’s desperate thanks.

His phone chimed. Unknown Sender.

“Fire starting in the wiring on the 4th floor. Wilshire Apartments. 5:13 AM. Pull east wall alarm.”

Scott stared at his screen. Wilshire Apartments. That was his building. The timestamp was forty minutes from now.

He shouldn’t leave work. Shouldn’t risk his job chasing anonymous texts. But his fingers were already logging out of his workstation, muscle memory from countless network emergencies taking over. “Server maintenance,” he typed in the night shift log. “Back in 30.”

The drive home felt endless. He parked at 5:09 AM, the dashboard clock’s green numbers burning into his vision. The building’s front door beeped as he badged in. Up the stairs—elevator was too slow—taking them two at a time until his legs burned. Fourth floor. 5:12 AM.

The hallway looked normal. Smelled normal. Felt normal. He was going to lose his job over a prank text.

Then, there it was. A faint crackling sound behind the wall, near an ancient fuse box. A tendril of smoke so thin he might have imagined it. The alarm was ten feet away, protected behind a glass panel.

5:13 AM.

He slammed his elbow through the glass and pulled the lever. The alarm’s scream split the pre-dawn quiet. Down the hall, a door opened. Mrs. Chen from 4C, clutching her cat. “Fire,” he shouted, already pounding on other doors. “Everyone out!”

By the time the fire trucks arrived, smoke was pouring from the walls. “Electrical fire,” the chief confirmed later. “Would’ve been much worse if we hadn’t caught it early. Whole building might have gone up.”

The message, like the first one, had vanished.

At the Daily Grind that morning, his hands still smelling of smoke, Cassandra didn’t comment on his early arrival or the fresh cuts on his elbow. But she had a first aid kit ready behind the counter and bandaged him up without being asked. Her hands were gentle, professional, yet they trembled slightly when they brushed his skin.

“You know,” she said, securing the last bandage, “there’s an old saying about guardian angels. They don’t always look like angels. Sometimes they look like IT guys who drink too much coffee.” She smiled, but it didn’t quite reach her eyes. Instead of happiness, he saw that she looked tired, almost ancient, like she’d seen too much.

The third message came a week later. A gas leak in a neighbor’s apartment. The fourth, three days after that. Brake lines cut in his co-worker’s car. Each time, the pattern repeated: specific instructions, narrow timeframes, and vanishing messages. Each time, disaster averted by mere minutes.

Between incidents, Scott threw himself into investigation mode. He wrote programs to monitor his phone’s incoming data, set up surveillance on his text messages, and tried to trace the network patterns. Nothing made sense. The messages obeyed no logic he could find, followed no patterns his code could detect.

His only constant was The Daily Grind, where Cassandra seemed to anticipate his increasingly erratic schedule. She’d started leaving newspapers open to stories about the incidents. Local man prevents tragedy; anonymous hero saves lives. “You never hear about the everyday heroes,” she said one morning as she slid him a fresh vanilla latte. “The ones who show up at exactly the right moment, exactly when they’re needed most.”

Their fingers touched on the cup. She didn’t pull away.

“Cassandra,” he started. The word catching in his throat. For once, lines of code couldn’t help him. Analytical thinking failed in the face of her steady gaze.

Her expression softened. “Not yet, Scott,” she whispered. “Soon. I promise, but not yet.”

The next morning, his phone chimed before dawn. Unknown Sender. But this message was different. This one had an attachment: a blueprint of The Daily Grind, with the basement gas lines highlighted in an angry red.

His coffee grew cold as he stared at the screen, remembering Cassandra’s eyes. Tired eyes. Knowing eyes. What else had those eyes seen?

The Warning

Scott’s desk chair creaked as he leaned closer to his monitor, the blueprint’s red lines burning into his vision. Four gas mains fed into the basement of The Daily Grind, all connecting near the ancient boiler. He knew the building’s basement layout from the times Cassandra had asked him to help with heavy supply deliveries, though he’d never paid much attention to the utility area behind the chainlink partition.

His phone chimed again. Same unknown sender.

“Gas leak will reach critical levels by 9:47 AM. Dozens will die in the morning rush. Cassandra checks boiler every Tuesday at 9:45.”

Tuesday. Today!

Scott checked his system clock: 5:23 AM. His hands moved automatically, calling up city records, building permits, inspection histories. The Daily Grind’s building was old built in 1922, last major renovation in 1985. Gas systems inspected… eighteen months ago. The inspection report loaded slowly, each pixel an eternity. “Aging infrastructure… recommended updates… still within safety parameters…”

He should call the gas company. The fire department. Someone with actual authority. But his screen still showed those vanished messages, his code still searched for traces that didn’t exist. Would they believe him? How long would it take them to respond? To verify? To act?

The morning rush at The Daily Grind started at 9:15. Businesspeople grabbing coffee before meetings. Students caffeinating before class. The elderly couple who shared a muffin by the window. The writers who camped out at the corner tables. Cassandra.

His phone chimed with one final message.

“You can’t save everyone.”

Including Cassandra.

His hands didn’t shake as he started the engine. The y hadn’t shaken during any of the other incidents. Crisis clarity. That’s what his old network security instructor had called it. When alarms blared and systems crashed, some people froze. Others found their purpose.

The Daily Grind’s lights were already on as he pulled into the empty parking lot. Through the window, he saw Cassandra setting up for the day, her movements precise and practiced. She looked up at his car’s approach, her shoulder’s tensing.

Scott checked his phone one last time: 5:47 AM. Four hours to change whatever she knew was coming.

The bell above the door chimed as he walked in.

The Crisis

Four hours felt like forever until it didn’t. Scott spent them testing every scenario he could think of: reporting a gas leak (dispatch said they’d send someone “within 24 hours”), calling the fire department (needed “concrete evidence”), attempting to convince the building manager (“Tuesday’s my golf day”). Each dead end brought him back to The Daily Grind, where he nurses his cooling coffees and watched Cassandra work, her movements growing more mechanical as the morning wore on.

At 9:15, right on the schedule, the rush began. Students with backpacks. Professionals with briefcases. The elderly couple claiming their window seat. Cassandra’s hands moved faster, but her eyes kept finding the clock, then him, then the basement door.

9:32 AM. The rotten-egg smell was subtle at first. Most customers wouldn’t notice it over the coffee and pastries. But Scott had spent weeks researching gas leaks after the apartment incident. He recognized the signs: the slight headaches people were tryingt o shake off, the barely perceptible metallic taste in the air.

“Everyone needs to leave,” he said, standing. His voice caught. He’d never raised it in public before. “Gas leak. Please exit immediately.”

A few people looked up. Most didn’t.

Cassandra’s head snapped toward him. For a moment, he saw relief flash across her face. Then steel. “Everyone!” Her voice carried authority his couldn’t muster. “This is an emergency. Please proceed calmly to the exits.”

The crowd moved slowly at first, then faster as the smell became unmistakable. Scott helped the elderly couple with their belongings. Held the door for students who were hastily closing their laptops mid-task. Guided the mother with the stroller down the entrance ramp.

9:41 AM.

“Cassandra!” He turned back to find her ushering the last customers out. “We need to go.”

She shook her head. “The basement valve. It has to be shut off manually. There’s a daycare next door. We can’t risk leaving it open.” Her voice caught. “I always check it. Every Tuesday. It’s my responsibility.”

“I’ll do it.”

“Scott, please.” Her eyes brimmed with tears. He’d never seen her cry before. “Not again.”

Again. The word hung between them like smoke.

9:43 AM.

The basement door groaned open. Stairs descended into shadow, emergency lights casting everything in sickly yellow. The smell was stronger here. Scott took the first step down.

Cassandra grabbed his arm. Her silver bracelet caught the light. “There are other timelines,” she whispered. “I’ve seen them all. You save everyone else, but…” She swallowed hard. “I can’t watch you die again.”

The pieces clicked: her knowing looks, the prepared first aid kit, the sad smiles. How many times had she lived this Tuesday?

9:44 AM.

“Then help me change it.” He held out his hand. “Show me where the valve is. We’ll be faster together.”

Her fingers intertwined with his. They descended into the basement’s darkness, Cassandra leading them through the maze of pipes with practiced steps. The gas smell was overwhelming now. Scott’s head swam.

The main valve was against the far wall. Cassandra’s hands moved to turn it.

“No.” Scott pulled her back. “The static from your polyester uniform. One spark…”

9:45 AM.

He stepped forward. The valve was old, resistant. Behind him, Cassandra’s bracelet clinked as she moved.

“Scott?” Her voice was small, different than he’d ever heard it. “In every timeline, I never get to tell you…”

The pipe groaned.

The Sacrifice

The pipe’s groan became a shriek. Metal shouldn’t bend that way. Scott had learned that during his research. Gas lines weren’t supposed to make these sounds. He’d learned how pressure built up until—

Time compressed. His body moved before his mind could catch up, years of emergency server responses translating into physical action. He shoved Cassandra toward the stairs, his hands finding her shoulders with unexpected certainty. For someone who’d always calculated every movement in social situations, who’d rehearsed simple handshakes, this felt like executing a perfect line of code.

“Run!”

She stumbled backward, catching herself on the railing. “No, you don’t understand…”

The valve fought him. His palms were slick with sweat, or maybe blood from where the metal bit into his skin. Above, the café creaked. Dozens of lives rested on this one turn, this one moment, this one choice.

9:46 AM.

Cassandra’s footsteps finally moved toward the stairs, slow at first, then faster. Each step echoed like a heartbeat.

The valve gave way beneath his hands, metal grinding against metal. Almost there. Almost—

Another shriek of metal. He felt the change in air pressure first. Then, her bracelet struck the rail.

A spark.

The blue pilot light flickered.

9:47 AM

The world turned white.

Later, through the ringing in his ears, through the weight of debris and the taste of copper, he heard footsteps hurrying down what remained of the stairs. Gentle hands cradled his head.

“Every time,” Cassandra whispered, her tears falling onto his face. “Every single time, you choose everyone else. You choose me. And I can never save you.”

He tried to focus on her face through the haze. “How many… did anyone…”

“You saved them all.” Her smile trembled. “Just like you always do.”

The ringing in his ears faded to a soft hum, like the sound of servers cooling down after a crisis. Like the steam wand on the espresso machine. Like the morning rush at The Daily Grind, where a shy IT guy finally worked up the courage to talk to a barista who knew his name before he ever said it.

“Cassandra?” His voice felt distant. “I should have asked you out that first morning.”

Her laugh was soft, broken. “You did.”

The world faded to quiet.

The Revelation

Through the haze of pain, Scott heard sirens in the distance. Cassandra’s hands hadn’t left his, her thumb tracing a small star patter on his palm. Such a familiar gesture. Why did it feel familiar.

“The first time,” she said softly, “you ordered a medium coffee. Black. I convinced you to try the vanilla latte because you looked like you needed something sweet in your life.” She brushed debris from his face with her free hand. “The second time you ordered it yourself. And every time after that.”

The world swam, but her voice anchored him. The ringing in his ears faded to a whisper.

“A hundred and forty-seven Tuesdays.” Her words fell on him like dying embers. “A hundred and forty-seven times I’ve drawn that little star on your cup. Watched you almost ask me out. Waited for that text to arrive. Tried to warn you without changing too much, because changing things always made it worse.”

The pieces aligned like a perfectly executed program: her anticipating his orders, the first aid kit ready before he needed it, the trembling hands when she touched him, knowing his name before he said it.

“I tried everything.” Her voice cracked. “Called the gas company myself. Pulled the fire alarm early. Closed the café. But if you didn’t come, the leak reached the bakery next door. The daycare down the street. More people died. It had to be you. It was always you.”

Scott tasted copper, felt the warmth spreading across his chest. “Why…” Speaking hurt, but he had to know. “Why didn’t you tell me?”

“The times I did, you tried to save everyone… to save me, the customers, yourself. It never worked. The universe demands a sacrifice.” She leaned closer, her tears mixing with the blood on his face. “But you always chose to save us all. You chose the customers, and you chose to save me. Every time. Even before you knew me, even before I loved you, you chose me.”

The sirens grew closer, but Scott knew it would be too late. It had always been too late. “How many?” he managed. “How many people?”

“Forty-three.” Cassandra’s voice was steady now. “Forty-three people are walking home to their families right now because of you. Because you chose. Again.”

His vision darkened at the edges. The pain was fading, replaced by a curious warmth. Like the comfort of his midnight office. Like the morning sun through the café windows. Like every cup of coffee she’d ever handed him, each one a small act of love he hadn’t recognized until now.

“Cassandra?” His voice was barely a whisper.

“Yes?”

“Next time…” He squeezed her hand with his remaining strength. “Next time, I want to try the blueberry muffin again.”

Her laughter broke on a sob. “It’ll be waiting for you. Same time as always.”

The darkness, when it came, tasted faintly of vanilla and carried with it the sound of a bell chiming above a shop door.

Consider the humble coffee shop, where lives intersect like lines of code, where routine becomes ritual, and where time itself can pause for the perfect cup. Scott Robison came searching for caffeine but found something far more potent—the knowledge that true heroism, like true love, will repeat itself endlessly until it gets things right. A final lesson served up at The Daily Grind, where last calls and first meetings blur together… in the Twilight Zone.

Author’s Note:

I still remember the first time my mom introduced me to The Twilight Zone. I was ten years old, sick, and bundled in a blanket on our couch. As the iconic theme music began to play, I had no idea I was about to discover a show that would fundamentally change how I understood storytelling.

When I learned about the fan celebration organized by

Sean Thomas McDonnell

and

J. Curtis

for the series' 66th anniversary, I knew I had to participate. What follows is my tribute to Rod Serling's groundbreaking creation and my expression of gratitude to the visionary writers whose work has captivated me countless times since that first viewing. To Rod Serling, Richard Matheson, and George Clayton Johnson-your stories have done more than entertain; they've provided comfort in difficult times and inspired me to pursue my own creative dreams.

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This story is offered with the deepest respect for these creators and their intellectual property. It stands as an homage to their enduring legacy, written in celebration of the unique blend of imagination, social commentary, and masterful storytelling that defined The Twilight Zone.