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Keith Long's avatar

Really good. Reminds me of that King story about the man who tells the future from his roadside stand

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oh lovely, really lovely. Thank you.

Nissa Harlow's avatar

Interesting premise!

Mark's avatar

Really excellent. Incredibly emotional. You’ve captured happy tears in a story.

Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

This was beautiful. Funny, sad, heartwarming... just beautiful. Very well done.

Tamara Casey's avatar

Excellent. Loved this.

Gregory Blair's avatar

I feel like Tommy: I really don't have the words. This is such a perfect story: funny, mysterious, sad. Just outstanding.

Andrew Sniderman 🕷️'s avatar

This is great John; Something Wicked This Way Comes vibes

SuperNana's avatar

A really great story!

Geraldine Hill's avatar

Very much up my street. Love it.

Shane Bzdok's avatar

As a stepfather to teenage girls, this hit... like a freight train. Absolutely beautiful, John. Thank you for sharing.