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Keith Long's avatar

Really good. Reminds me of that King story about the man who tells the future from his roadside stand

Paddy Turner's avatar

Beautiful story. I really like how you intertwine mystery and comedy.

Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

Thank you, John. That was lovely .

John Ward's avatar

Thank you.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oh lovely, really lovely. Thank you.

Nissa Harlow's avatar

Interesting premise!

Mark's avatar

Really excellent. Incredibly emotional. You’ve captured happy tears in a story.

Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

This was beautiful. Funny, sad, heartwarming... just beautiful. Very well done.

Tamara Casey's avatar

Excellent. Loved this.

Gregory Blair's avatar

I feel like Tommy: I really don't have the words. This is such a perfect story: funny, mysterious, sad. Just outstanding.

Andrew Sniderman 🕷️'s avatar

This is great John; Something Wicked This Way Comes vibes

SuperNana's avatar

A really great story!

Geraldine Hill's avatar

Very much up my street. Love it.

Shane Bzdok's avatar

As a stepfather to teenage girls, this hit... like a freight train. Absolutely beautiful, John. Thank you for sharing.