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Mark Williams's avatar

I don’t know if I would…. But I knew the glass was going to be cleaned

John Ward's avatar

You just might win best comment. That’s hilarious.

Mark Williams's avatar

In a nod to Peter Gabriel I was toying with a comment on the next one of “don’t shock the monkey” 😂

Miep 💥's avatar

A lamp cleaned in the first act has to go off in the third

John Ward's avatar

This one went off in the second… kinda.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

I’ve noticed my phone camera makes dust real visible. This is an intriguing start!

sami's avatar

but what happens next????

Crixcyon's avatar

In real life, the glass I clean seems to never end up being clean. In the direct sunlight, you can see the dirt, dust, smudges and contamination on just about any hard surface.

William F. Edwards's avatar

Nice to see you publishing fiction again, still remember the one with Scoop. If Nate survives this he's definitely getting banned from the cellar. I want to make some sort of library science student comment about the store's set up but nothing is coming to mind.